Guest haiku: Cinnamon Rossman

After seeing my haiku-blog recently, Ms. Rossman sent me this haiku in return, a fine poem, indeed. Ms. Rossman is the regional sales-manager at Streamline Publishing.

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haiku blog rains words
unknown grey situations
leaves me wondering

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One Response to Guest haiku: Cinnamon Rossman

  1. Al Don Vey says:

    I like this. Does “grey” convey any new information or is “grey” redundant of “unknown” taking away a little energy from the line? I am undecided about the “s” on leave.
    A keeper.

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