Day 2657

Day 2657
my feet found the trail,
the pace was good, the sunlight
angled through the trees
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One Response to Day 2657

  1. Al Don Vey says:

    “the pace was good” connects with your tag lines and could be the last line; thereby, emphasizinf it and allowing the elimination of the comas. The first line then could be “sun angled” (angling) etc.

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